The track was great, just a few minor technicalities. (Did I spell that right?)
First, you should make everything smoother, Like forinstance your flings seem to start and stop in the middle of them and it just kills the flow.
Second try not to over lap lines on your flings enless they start to get extremly big. This sometimes can actually make your flings a lot more powerful and can make your flings seem more like flings rather than a flanual (Check the 20 second mark).
One more thing. Perform more tricks other than flings and manuals. Try chains or learn how to make alt. fliings, or make flanuals. You lnow, try something new.
This track was enjoyable.
I say: Expierienced.