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Join date : 2009-11-27
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PostSubject: Slaughter- EROS   Slaughter- EROS EmptySat Dec 05, 2009 5:13 pm

here is an all blue track that ive made.. i made a preview of it but here is the whole track.. i know its short, sooo if you want me to CONTINUE it.. i will
im sorry about recording and if you watch it on YT.. the audio is disabled so yeah

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PostSubject: Re: Slaughter- EROS   Slaughter- EROS EmptySat Dec 05, 2009 7:04 pm

pretty good track bro.

keep up the good work
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PostSubject: Re: Slaughter- EROS   Slaughter- EROS EmptySun Dec 06, 2009 1:40 am

that was really good just make it longer
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Join date : 2009-12-03
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PostSubject: Re: Slaughter- EROS   Slaughter- EROS EmptyTue Dec 08, 2009 10:18 am

The track was great, just a few minor technicalities. (Did I spell that right?)

First, you should make everything smoother, Like forinstance your flings seem to start and stop in the middle of them and it just kills the flow.

Second try not to over lap lines on your flings enless they start to get extremly big. This sometimes can actually make your flings a lot more powerful and can make your flings seem more like flings rather than a flanual (Check the 20 second mark).

One more thing. Perform more tricks other than flings and manuals. Try chains or learn how to make alt. fliings, or make flanuals. You lnow, try something new.

This track was enjoyable.

I say: Expierienced.
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